smitten

[MiNiMoWs]

written for a complete asshole.
Smitten
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Countless nights I played your whore
Competing with the rival score
Of snapshots flaunting younger face
Cheap objects of your sneaky chase
My greatest mediocrity is this
My false morality
And scheming personality
In our synthetic galaxy
With tanning beds and plastic wealth
I tried to reinvent myself
A piece of you in my reflection
A pale and penniless imperfection
My words are all disposable
My problem, psychological
My thoughts are indigestible
My recklessness, infallible
Repeated prose will cause frustration
It's mine, not your, infatuation
Feels like my hearts been scratched or bitten
Clearly, you were never smitten.
[This message has been edited by MiNiMoWs (edited 13 February 2001).]

 

[drea]

that was beautifully written....
the only bad part is that i can tell you were ( or are) very hurt

schmile

drea

 

[HakunaMatata]

!!!! VERY VERY VERY powerful and extremely well written !!!
I think it's fantastic that you can take your emotions and create something as strong as this peace.
Quick recovery of your broken heart.
Loves,
-Amina
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Contingency Account for WritnPage during software glitches.

 

[MiNiMoWs]

*shameless bump*

 

[L O V E L I F E]

MiNiMoWs:
On October 12th, I responded to the "Ten Bluelighters I'd Like To Meet" thread with:
"(5) MiNiMoWs..........HAVE NOT MET.....I remember the "Glory Days" of Bluelight earlier this year. I hadn't starting posting yet; however, I often spent several hours per day lurking. Every so often, the board would be "on fire!" That is, there would be SEVERAL exceptionally funny exchanges going on at the same time. While there were several posters whose senses of humor impressed me, one in particular, MiNiMoWs', impressed me the most.
She is also one of the handful of folks on the board who can post something side-splittingly funny one minute, and two minutes later bring me to tears with an emotionally-charged post."
The FOLLOWING DAY, on October 13th, you posted this poem.
Thank you for confirming my great taste.

 

[RaveAngel]

very nice
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*Shine on you crazy diamond.....*
*Sunni came home with a vengeance*
*Somwhere over the rainbow skies are blue, and dreams that you dare to dream really do come true.*

 

[MiNiMoWs]

he's still an asshole.
my god, how i miss him.

 

[EbowTheLetter]

and she's still a bitch...
funny, ain't it?

 

[ice-9]

damn.

 

[mr_fluffy]

i envy you mini, pouring you heart out, giving us a look into your very soul, and making it rhyme. you are trully good.

we're not worthy,
we're not worthy,
we're not worthy.

 

[liquidocean]

What is it interesting women that prevents them from ever indulging in 'happy' love?
Very well written, mini, nice rhythmn and projected cynicism, i can see the scowl on your face, and i can picture you wanting to scratch his eyes out or fuck him like crazy,
or both

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[firstrays]

I don't mean this as an insult,...
This sounds like some Gwen Steffani rap lyrics,... tough as shit, but about love, or unrequited love,...
Talk Hard!
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It's not until you've lost everything that your free to do anything.

 

[*SWeeT-e*]

Excellent writing!!
Post more in this forum, if ya please.

~kimmy.

 

[~ * ~ MaD HaTTeR ~ * ~]

wow....

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I am lost, I've gone to find myself, if I should return before I get back have me wait....
Ever dance with the devil in the pale moon light.... -joker
Sufferin-sucka-tash
AOL name: MaDHaTTeR92578
ICQ: 121509637

 

[Noodle]

wow (too)

 

[Ariela]

Geez, the timing of this bump is unbelievable. Always a great poem.
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"George W. Bush gave us compassionate conservatism, which is an oxymoron right up there with jumbo shrimp."---Stephen King

 

[E-girl]

bump anyone, for miss mini?