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sliding glass

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Sliding glass makes a noise so loud you can only hear it inside your head. It's too loud for anything else.
Sliding glass and sliding doors are two very different things.
The sliding glass I know, I don't think even exists.
Only in my head, I see panes of glass rubbing against eachother in one scene, and in the next I see granules of sand slide down each pane.

Sliding and rubbing, one after the other making my head spin with the noise.
When the sand runs out and slides no more, it comes from nowhere.
All the rubbing corroding the panes to their original state.
Sand everywhere, falling all around.

Glass and noise go together.
They always have.
Resonating sounds inside my head.
 
such an indefinable piece lnf.

like most of your writing, it really makes me think. i've probably said this before, but i like the way your writing really makes me pay attention - it encourages you to actively read, and think about the actual content and metaphor that you're using.

simple idea, but well phrased and it really leave you with a curious feeling and an unformed question.
 
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