Silver through rosy flesh

[princess_kitti]

This is the first time I've written in about 6 months so I'm a bit scared of the result ~ kitti


I make luxurious love
To the kitchen knife
Silver through rosy flesh
On a wintery morning

Crimson mingles with rain
Art on the flowerbed
Seeking lush life
To drown in the pool
Of raving starving Tantalus

Reflections pirouet
Slowly out of sight
And you, my faithful soul
Linger in the quiet afternoon

 

[yakksoho]

Tantalising, vicious
cuts through
and lingers

never stop raining

 

[(Wordy)]

Well put, yakksoho.

This is the first time I've written in about 6 months so I'm a bit scared of the result

I think you should definitely keep up the writing if you can princess_kiti, though I know it's hard sometimes (for everyone I think). This piece shows that you are gifted.

 

[princess_kitti]

thankyou .... i really need to be inspired to write and sometimes that can be a true challenge.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^ I know the feeling, I havent written in about six months myself, this was really smooth, full of colour with emotions just sitting on the edge! Please write some more!