Silent Witness-Watcher

[EverythingsEventual]

My heart-breaker ex came over the other week and we ended up kissing when we shouldn't have...

This is what I wrote afterwards.


Dear one you don't know it yet
But I watch over as you sleep
Kiss tired eyelids closed
Stroke pillow-creased skin
Whisper consolations when you cry out
Watch in silent understanding
You are not mine, I would not wish it so
But remember this; I am guardian
Seeing all you've been through
Reflected in changeling green
You will not fall from grace forever
I would give you my wings to fly again
Seperate souls with seperate lives
Yet our dreams aren't so different
Just remember this; I am guardian
Warrior of peace and solace
Exuding comfort and resolution
Throughout your life however lead
The silent witness-watcher
That stands at your shoulder.

 

[froggygirl]

I really like this, I know exactly how that feels.. Good words, nicely put. Good job

 

[RareForm]

Dear one you don't know it yet
But I watch over as you sleep
Kiss tired eyelids closed

This was my favorite part of this wonderful piece...it kind of gave me butterflies when I read that part..i can relate to these words a great deal

fantastic write!

Thanks for sharing. :D

 

[EverythingsEventual]

*nods*

Thank you

I think this is the best piece I've written in a long time and I'm glad to see people enjoy it!

 

[neverwas]

good work

 

[frostyangel]

sweet..

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Love this!

 

[cherub]

So very touching, regardless if it was an ex or not you definately have some real feelings there,,, which is not always bad as long you know where they stand.

excellent writting!!