*sigh*

[Mr. Nice Guy]

If you only knew
what I felt
what I still feel
maybe you would not have turned away
to run from what you did not know
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i'm not sure if I should add more, or leave it as it is. It feels incomplete, yet everything I want to emote is already there.
-ric
[This message has been edited by Mr. Nice Guy (edited 21 January 2001).]

 

[Aja909]

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**Official promoter for the Soulfly Radio Network**
"I'm gonna blow you up"

 

[sarah*aka*s*k*]

Leave it.
Its perfect.
Short and Sweet.
If you wanted to even it out just make the last verse three lines.
eg.
maybe you would not
have turned away
to run from what you did not know.
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"Always give a stranger a chance, because if you don't they will always remain a stranger."
S(x)K(tn)

 

[RuFf RyDeR]

y tears tell me to tell you to leave it be

 

[ice-9]

A heartfelt *thanks* for the input. I really appreciate it, everyone.
-ric
(formerly Mr. Nice Guy)

 

[cherub]

awwwww i liked this,, and good new name

:::hugs::::

 

[ice-9]

hugz cherub back