*sigh*

[Noodle]

*sigh*
hey you

there is a silver crystal,
not un- like a silver bullet
to penetrate and exit I,
a white light refracted out to be
the spectrum- split into bits and pieces
kalidescope like
over all of the inner darkness of a white box
with a single blind drawn down to shadow the room
all of this, I mind you is
the most between the darkness of a me
within
and the sun blazing mourning high
and now also rising
---------
...thankyou for playing with me *sigh* 2.
[ 02 April 2002: Message edited by: Noodle ]

 

[ShelleBear]

After reading all your replies in social, I wasnt sure what to expect when I clicked on this.
I have to say that you completely, utterly shocked me.
This is very well written, and very deep. I must say that it was thought provoking, and full of passion and emotion.
Shelle

 

[writnpage]

Hmmm. I'm not shocked at all. I was expecting a fantastic poem from Noodle one of these days and YAY..here it is

. I've always been impressed by the "virtual" jargon that often uses extremely round-about ways to getting to a very special meaning...a sometimes ridiculuous and scintilating, but often, very amusing, interesting and intelligent percpective into our own selves. A style, Noodle exhibits extremely skilfully.
Loads of luvs,
-Amina
__________________
Promote Patience, Understanding and Acceptance
[This message has been edited by writnpage (edited 31 July 2000).]

 

[Noodle]

Thanks twice for listening and looking. There is always light after night, if you sleep and then wake up in the morning, refreshed.

 

[Ashke]

For what it's worth... painful and beautiful glimpse. Thank you.
~*~ Ashke ~*~

 

[Burgundy Buddha Lady]

that's definitely a new perspective. you're thoughts are boundless and catching.
~really enjoyed~
p.s. thanks for responding to me!

 

[Noodle]

...thanks for the feedback. All of this tapping and thinking and sniffing was not for naught I do now declare. ~ *thank you* ~

 

[Noodle]

Bump for review by xtremeink.

 

[writnpage]

Bump - because this peice is genius

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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen

 

[xtremeink]

Good. Makes me want to wipe a tear.
Peace,
xtremeink

 

[xtremeink]

Writnpage, my post was a compliment!
Go back and reread his poem. Tell me that the imagery does not evoke a picture of someone looking at a sunrise with one eye shut and a tear over the other.
Lighten up, please.

Peace,
xtremeink

 

[xtremeink]

Noodle, I liked your poem a lot. Please don't let Writnpage try to convince you otherwise.
Hugs,
xtremeink

 

[xtremeink]

Writnpage, you are out of line.
I was not writing anything sarcastic about this poem. I read it twenty times before I posted anything about it, not just because it was bumped, but because I wanted to make some sense of it all.
I tried to understand what Noodle was writing. It wasn't until I read the very last line "thank for playing" that I decided that it must have been a riddle to solve.
I will be the first person to raise my hand and say when I don't understand something. Maybe I missed the whole point. But I am probably going to be the first person who asks why the king has no clothes, not because I am insulting Noodle but simply because I don't understand.
So please enlighten me. What was this poem all about to YOU?
xtremeink

 

[xtremeink]

Writnpage, your ability to love is only exceeded by your ability to hate. Maybe you will see that one day.
Peace,
xtremeink

 

[xtremeink]

Writnpage, show me where I have tried to bring down reputations (besides addressing your personal attacks on me). I have disagreed with Pyro elsewhere in this forum but not because I think less of him. He is possibly the sharpest person on Bluelight and if anyone is going to find flaws in my assertions regarding positive thinking, he will first. He is my reality check. I had a positive suggestion for Noodle - relax, take things in moderation, don't go down the road to jadedness. If I can stop one person from going down that path, I will. Is that so wrong?
I write the way I write; it comes from the heart and the words I choose are mine. I am not your enemy, despite what you think. And if I seem egotistical, it's because I suck at getting my point across with humility. I'm learning. Maybe I need more smileys.

I'm not looking for mad props but if you're willing to entertain a positive discussion, I'm here.
Peace,
xtremeink

 

[Noodle]

That is admirable--to write from the heart. I agree that to become jaded is to stumble into a pit.
I appreciate your candor.

 

[poezante]

i like this.. very discriptive.. i love imagery saturated poems..

 

[Noodle]

awwwwhhhhh...

thanks a whole lot

I still wonder where my head was when i put this to paper?
There is something to be said for the inspiration of madness...

 

[CARESS]

"all of the inner darkness of a white box"
Wow, my lovely. Those words jumped out at me and assaulted my mind. How very beautiful! We are complex creatures, are we not? One contradiction after another.
Thank you, my talented friend. This was amazing...but then I expected nothing less from you.

You amaze me with every post, no matter the forum.
Love,
Caress

 

[Noodle]

Hey all. This was a dark time for me; As much too much meth was consumed by me.
Some of you older heads might remeber how freaked I had become, and that I had insisted on sharing all of my babble, bad times, and feelings with you all, just because at the time I felt something needed to be said about the dangers of meth.
It has been over a year since this post and maybe like 6 months since I did a line or too, but damn, I still think about it too often.
later then...