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Short poem... Would like critique

caseface99

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I wrote this down in my journal the other night, inspired by a friend girl. I haven't written in forever and usually have a low opinion of my writing, would like honest criticisms/comments. :)

The sky at night
Moons delight

Constellations teaming
Consciousness is beathing

Sailing the sea's of love
Like a pair of dove's

Divide by zero
Cannot even a hero

Impossible too, seems this feeling
Like meditating, It's healing

Metaphysical awareness in mind
Eternal ignorance left behind

A Karmic interaction
Astrological infraction

Divine meaning
Energy gleaming

Like soaring Doves, up so high
It can only be you, my night sky
 
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