shiny parrot

[anythingthatflies]

Well, im new here and I write abstract imagery. Judging from the fact that I received no feedback on my past poem, "dust and echoes", I'd say that no one that goes into this forum is very into alternate styles of writing. Never-the-less I will continue to post my trivial writings here.
-Shiny Parrot-
I see twisting dead faces in a tropical shadow
I saw black fire brush against your bone marrow
I have yet to see lunacy in the stars that follow
Creep up on my soul
Ransack it like gold
We’re cutting teeth with eyes
Lies, flies, justice and pie
You are the amethyst creator I fucked
You bleed orange and that, I sucked
Toothless japanese bats warming the veins
Park pain outside the palace of rain
Kinetic field of shining blue breath
Confess this remarkable sin no less
Dive right into my soul juice
Flail and berserk your way loose
Walk back down the hall dripping
That smell is so different.

 

[E-girl]

Kinetic field of shining blue breath
beautiful imagery!
i really enjoy your style... and trust me, i DID read your other poem and liked it as well, i was behind a firewall at the time and couldn't reply. but i fully intend to do that after i reply to this one.
this has a dreamy tone to it... something i like in my own cut-and-dry writing. you paint a picture in my mind with your words.
its great to have a new favorite poet in here!