Scream

[RareForm]

Speak up I can't hear you
The pain is too loud
Your brutal manner
Subsequent sadness
You may have to scream
That’s the only way I understand
That’s the only way I’ll know
Not too loud
You might break my stride
Hold your mouth against my cheek
Express your unhappiness
I’ll be the one
I’ll be your pedestal
Bring me back to Earth
I thought I was flying
Once
You thought I was dying
Once
Make me understand
Your pain equals mine

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I fuckin feel you cuz, very, very nice.

 

[haste]

I enjoyed this

 

[ev0l]

i like the way it reads, good job.

 

[E-girl]

been there. to me, it was always the silent screams that got me.

 

[cherub]

definately a deep poem with alot of feeling,
makes me feel it, and relate.

awesome

 

[faceless_shadow]

awesome....i love to read what you write...

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Hey um...sir Todd cool poem although I read it already ...never gets old

 

[Pantomime7]

your writings never get antiquated, I love evry piece. This one speaks volumes and I relate to this definitley.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

That’s the only way I’ll know
Not too loud
You might break my stride

^I can relate to this wholly.

Make me understand
Your pain equals mine

^So poetic, and resounding..I love this part. Makes me purse my lips in a quiet reverence for my own faults.

Wow. This was very nicely put together, as I read, felt like I was climbing a staircase. This is a very well constructed piece.

 

[neverwas]

everything u write has its own seperate meaning and i am always intrigued with the factors behind what u write