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harraser

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Oct 3, 2001
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Oh the simple pleasures...
The confusion of ambiguity
The frustration of an unknown anger
Why why why why why?
Lost on a backroad
To nowhere in particular
Or possibly everywhere at once
Sit down on the gutter
Amongst the filth and glory
To contemplate the view.
Why arent i here?
Why arent i here?
Why cant i feel it?
And why arent i here?
What was thought to be a first
Of matter, importance
May be a little more constant than originally suspected
Molar eyes miss things such as this
When clouded by blood-clots
And inner skull mood-light
Such dark interiors
Are a much more scenic view
Than these chopping board fields
Of the dreaded "Outside"
(Far too much left hanging in and off them anyway)
So i sit
And contemplate,
As im wont to do,
The day of my ocular-ectomy
The hopeful opening of my eyes.
And i ponder the question
Of my wet cement resting point
And how it seems to harden slowly
But too quickly for me to get away.
 
Don't ever accept the feeling of being stuck. No matter how much joy, peace, comfort, or even merely continuity it may bring you. It will destroy so many other things in it's wake, and it will never be okay.
Beautifully expressed, as always love. Be expecting email very soon. :)
 
You constantly surprise and thrill me with your talent. Every poem you post just seems to get better and better. More subtle, more beautiful, more emotional, more powerful.
Urgh - You couldn't spare some of that skill could you? Would be much appreciated. ;)
 
you send chills up my back with the emotion you release. You bring a smile to my face b/c i know you are such an amazing soul. Thank you for constantly expressing yourself here :) Thank you for being you :D i adore it.
 
It has taken me far to long to reply to this,
I have read it over and over, not even speaking to you in person about it, but it has been on my mind,
Each day, knowning you and reading this peice of work,,, still amaze me everyday of your mind and like i agree with ange,, you are an amazing soul that is for sure.
Wonderful piece luv
my favorite part
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So i sit
And contemplate,
As im wont to do,
The day of my ocular-ectomy
The hopeful opening of my eyes.
love you ant :)
 
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