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zero9zero

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first off.. you all need to understand I'm taking Valium for a back injury and my mind isn't exactly functioning *right*
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Reality rose like the sun..
And still I slept through it
"I can always witness it another morning"
The thoughts like these, cemented in procrastination
Now this part of 'she' is liquid, somewhere on the floor,
As a self-defiant need for a cure
Diagnosed to emerge and roam away
From roads as thick as foam
You wish to burn the candles that quietly service the arm
Another day with the shades pulled down
Until the swallow returns her to sleep
A father knocks on the silent door
While this part of 'she' has become an inferno of shame
Louder than we expect from such silent candles
Not so secret anymore
Now the eyes of my eyes have opened
Now the eyes of my eyes cling dear
Never let the swallow return you back to sleep
The smell of wounds have left you bug-bitten here
And again I know reality shall rise tommorw
This time, I hope to be awake
For I cannot postpone another morning
Never let the swallow return you to sleep
Not so secret anymore
dave
 
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Now the eyes of my eyes have opened
Now the eyes of my eyes cling dear
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very well put.
I love reading all of your poems, they really make me think about all that is going on in my life. They also let me know that i am not alone, especially when i have no one to talk to. I'd like to talk to you some time, you sound like a very intelligent and interesting person, and im sure you are.
AIM - LMA5402
thnx
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'Come to the edge' he said
'We are scared' they said
'Come to the edge' he insisted
They came, he pushed them...and they flew
 
I am so very touched by what you wrote that the only thing I can offer is something that I wrote not too long ago, I hope it conveys to you the feeling that you are not alone...
I have emerged from a world of sloth and greed,
Controlled by fear and hate,
My soul burdened by the ignorance,
Of a society blinded by Big Mac’s and Prada,
Gorged in the ideology of idiot savant’s,
Capable and destined to subdue the free spirit and mind,
At the touch of a button,
Or the resounding pound of a gavel,
Insanity delivered through the medical genius,
And a subtle needle prick,
Hoping to cure those sick of mind,
But they are not sick,
Merely different,
Refusing to share in the same blindness that the rest of us,
So easily adhere to without asking the ever obvious questions,
In spite of the rebellions which created our great democracies,
We seek to shelter and destroy those with a different view,
Hoping to maintain the status quo,
There is no shame in rebellion,
For one man’s rebellion is,
Another man’s question,
I have emerged from nothing,
For I hide behind the fear which ensures that I never,
Show the world that I am different,
That I am unlike the others,
Believing for a moment,
That it is the free spirit and mind,
Which will forever distinguish us,
From animals,
I have emerged from the world of sloth, greed, fear and hate,
Only to perpetuate it,
By refusing to allow others in...
As you must surely see, many of us in this ever growing cultural movement which defies defintion, feel the same things that you do, keep writing because nobody can ever take that away from us.
With love and respect,
The Enhancer
[email protected]
 
Wow... those were both so great. SO great.
zero9 --- I LOVE the title. I mean LOVE it. I wish I had thought of it first... hehe
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*Shine on you crazy diamond.....*
*Sunni came home with a vengeance*
*Somwhere over the rainbow skies are blue, and dreams that you dare to dream really do come true.*
 
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