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Read My Rights

NeWBoRN

Bluelighter
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England
July 21 2001,
Saturday 00:00
As the night casts it blanket over the sky, only to soon fall off the other side of our bed, I watch the stars through my closed eyes. The hole in the dark sky is throwing too many complications our way. If only for one night I could reach you and spread my misunderstanding.
II. I wake up, asleep. in the darkest, most colourful room I have ever had the pleasure to ignore. The all powerful painful silence bringing comfort to my ears and, rooted to the spot I try to stop running.
III. You see I never have been afraid of my own free will because I know that it is not free. It comes at a price that we all have to pay. A little like laid law longing to break lifes limits. They read me my rites as I sleep. they give me my boundaries. But through my unconciousness I will defeat them.
A wise man once spoke,
" Beyond the walls of intelligence life is defined."
now read me my rights, turn off the lights and I will define.........................
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See you there.....
 
i definitely wish i would have read this one sooner
i cant really articulate what i think of this work - but just know that its good
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Mella
 
great work. i love the contradicting statements ("I wake up, asleep. in the darkest, most colourful room...") i can't count the number of times that i have felt like that.
 
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