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unicorn83

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I sit here and I think
How can I prove to you,
That you my love are the only guy
I want to be true to.

I said I loved you, but words don’t mean a thing, i hug I kiss you, but as well,
do actions really mean a thing?
I think to myself what haven’t I done before and a thought crosses my mind
I’ve never written a love poem.

I sit and wait for thoughts to flow
But nothing comes out except for
The following words…..


I say I love you and I promise that I do
i want you in my arms, I swear my baby its true.

I look in your eyes, and my heart still skips a beat
No matter how long it lasts, you’ll always make me feel complete.

Every second of every day, you move me in every way,
I want you physically spiritually and mentally
And no matter how long it takes, for you to believe me,
I’ll hang on to this love,
As you mean everything to me.

You are picture perfect with a flawless
touch, I loved many guys but never this much.

When I first really laid eyes on you, I never
believed that my dreams would come true.
You were sent to me from a heavenly place,
You have a sexy smile with an angel's face.
We wanted each other and we achieved it,
it blows my mind I still can't believe it.
It was a coincidence or a twist of fate,
it doesn't matter because it’ll always feel so great.

I sit here and try,
to write a thousand feelings in one night,
But no words can describe, not how I feel about you
But how much your presence,
has made me become a person,
who wants to be true.

'Cause babe when I lay eyes on you, I still can’t believe that my dream has come true
Lead the way and I'll follow through, do whatever
it takes to prove my love to you.

I’ve never written a love poem, nor been so honest so true,
But I hope my love, this means something to you ;)
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i fell in love with him four months ago and it keeps on getting better and better, though we're gonna be in two different continents for the next 6 months, and i just want him to know how much i love him, as i've been a bad girl in the past, but this time it's true.
 
unicorn83 said:


Lead the way and I'll follow through, do whatever
it takes to prove my love to you.


this was absoultely beautiful. it made my heart jump. your choice of words did more than justify ur feelings and emotions for this person. they were easily identified through ur writting. well done hun. im sure he is a very lucky guy. i specailly like the lines i quoted...they are amazing...

=D
 
thanx:) already showed it to him, and apparently he loved it! and still our relationship is getting better and better :)
 
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