rain

[FoX]

They rain down from the sky
Chunks of concrete
Last gasps of common sense
Kill this
Avenge that
Justice at all costs
Where will it end?
What really died?

 

[xena]

i agree. that's the same thing i have been wondering all week.
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~susan
i've said my piece... peace out.
AIM: imJUSTaSNERK

 

[~ * ~ MaD HaTTeR ~ * ~]

What really died?
I have been asking the same question...
/me hugs FoX

 

[Ariela]

That was great, Fox. And too true.

 

[Sara Tonin]

Very sad, but good Fox.

 

[ravergurl83]

wow. so few words, yet so much emotion.
and so wonderfully expressed. thanks so much

 

[FoX]

Thank you.

I often find myself a prisoner of specificity...I write and write and write until the point of what I want to say is buried under the weight of hundreds of words.
I need to remember the power of brevity more often.

 

[Dagny]

Ah yes, the hundred-word problem when all you really want to say is "Pain" or "Love" or any of the other words that have a definition a mile long.
Well done Fox.