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Punch e's 3am Moan (yeh, i was stoned)

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It's hard for me to say that I miss the crazy times
Because it is almost to admit defeat.
But as I sit, stranded in this moment,
Poring over the insanity of the past
My body aches for the lack of adrenalin in my veins
And seratonin in my brain
And so I sit, ever alert and ever prepared
For inspiration's window of opportunity
For the mutinied ship of sweet chaos
To come rolling in
Still awake at 3am,
Hacking away at the dead wood edifice of my present situation
Only to retire to numbness beyond care
In a place in my heart
Where there was once contentedness and rest
There is now a vacuum of cold gravity
Because the heart is a muscle
And once it has been built to handle a heavy load
It can only waste away with the decrease in excercise
Right now, I miss the crazy times.
However, being an incurably crazy person
I will always see
An insane red sun
Rising in the east
 
I will always see
An insane red sun
Rising in the east
You man, are a fucking genius. And crazy man. :)
I really fucking related to this one, and can relate to your language very well as well. So I give it three thumbs up (brandishes third arm).
:D
-plaz out-
 
Thanku Plaz!! :)
Altho I reckon the title of genius is a bit rich for a 23 year old who works in a video arcade, Im extrememly flattered. Because the praise is comin from someone who's written some pretty bloody good shit in this 'ere forum himself.
And Istigeit- cheers bro. i could always use more empathy ;)
 
Really amazing work punch e. Melancholy beauty.
Hacking away at the dead wood edifice of my present situation
Only to retire to numbness beyond care
Great writing.
 
Thanx ppl! glad to have hit home with a few of you :)
And Belisimo- I cant vouch for ur writing skills, but let me say that u r one of the most beautifully creative people I know. thanku for inspiring me :)
 
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