Psychosis love.

[DarkPoet]

I don't think you know,
how paranoid you made me.

You suddenly were fine,
when you'd made me think they hate me.

I thought you were divine,
now I see it was a cover,

I thought I'd landed mine,
when you took me for your lover.

I let my landings crash,
when you broke my inner freedom.

You can keep the parts you took,
some how I think you'll need them.

D.P.04

 

[EverythingsEventual]

Very sharp and to the point. I really like this x

 

[cherub]

I like this alot reminds me some talks i have had with myself about certain substances, dunno probably not the case with you but that is just what hits me .

Writting is outstanding though I love the flow and feel of it strong yet smooth!

 

[DarkPoet]

I've had the substance experiences too but this was about a person, in fact the substance experiences came after the person.

Their paranoia came from a combination of substances and realy bad shit that happened to them and I felt like I became "infected"with it.

Thanks btw, I realy appreciate the feedback and you E.E, succint(sp) is how I describe it, thanks