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Proof Read My V-dAy Poem!

DocMaxinK

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I know some of it is cheesey, but its to my girlfriend, and I am going to give it to her in folded in a box of chocolates for Valentines day... so just tell me what you think.. I am probably going to get some stationary and write it on that, or type it and print it on some nice cardstock... anyways...
I feel there is no more right way to start
Other than to tell you this poem is straight from my heart
These words are all the truth and there are no lies
How could it not be with the way I feel when looking into your eyes
When I look into yours eyes I get a feeling that I am lost
The time we spend together can not be bought with any cost
There is nothing I know that compares to your touch
And the time we share together is never enough and never too much
Everything that is mine I am willing to share
Because the words on this paper can not express how much I care
Everyday I look forward to learning something new
Because there is no one else I am more interested in than you
I’ve always heard people say the best things in the world come free
And they are right because to me that is spending time with Molly Marie
I knew there was something special from the second the first time I saw you
So I followed my basic instincts and they turned out to be more than true
Everyday we are together things seem to get better
You make the sun shine in even the cloudiest weather
I feel like a part of me is missing when you are not near
But when you are around, there is nothing for me to fear
Sometimes I have to hold myself back from becoming too obsessed
Because the way I feel when I am around you can not be expressed
Sometimes you say you are scared and that you are afraid
But you can always fall back o the memories that have been made
There is one thing I know in this world that is totally real
And that is how much I care for you and how I feel
You are someone I think the world of
And you are someone that I love
I only have one more thing to say
Happy Valentines Day!
 
do u have a brother ?? ;-)
honestly that is beautiful, i wod luv to get that poem from my boyfreind...
im sure she will luv it thers nuthin beta than i guy doin sumthing like that 4 his gurl
goodluck
 
this was beautiful, and obviously straight from your heart. she's going to get all mushy over it!
*sigh* i am spending v-day with my cats. at least i know they love me.
 
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