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Bluelighter
This is a song I've wrote that I want anyone to hear who is willing to check it out. I'm just looking for some positive and/or negative criticism because I can't tell if it completely sucks, is amazing, or somewhere in between. It took me roughly 3 hours a night for a week to get to this point. So here it is -
Sometimes I just wanna sit down and jot mysterious riddles.
Intertwining jibberish scribbles at the apex of space and time.
Pleading my case to the jury that's hung, no acquittal.
An intellectual, dissecting schemes of rhyme, it's perfection.
It seems that life is merely our most vivid dream.
The only question is to be or not to be.
The mind's eye is caught in a fine line, unfolding space and time.
Between yin and yang of pure thought of the most divine.
Creation, a labyrinth of infinite mazes, unraveling minds.
Splattering patterns, scattering visuals across perceptual fields.
Elemental flows form expansive thought and awareness,
Is reflection of me, myself, and I, it's perfection.
Pouring essence of being through phonetic scrabble,
Babbling vibrations, distorting matter, it's progression.
Sometimes I just wanna sit down and jot mysterious riddles.
Intertwining jibberish scribbles at the apex of space and time.
Pleading my case to the jury that's hung, no acquittal.
An intellectual, dissecting schemes of rhyme, it's perfection.
It seems that life is merely our most vivid dream.
The only question is to be or not to be.
The mind's eye is caught in a fine line, unfolding space and time.
Between yin and yang of pure thought of the most divine.
Creation, a labyrinth of infinite mazes, unraveling minds.
Splattering patterns, scattering visuals across perceptual fields.
Elemental flows form expansive thought and awareness,
Is reflection of me, myself, and I, it's perfection.
Pouring essence of being through phonetic scrabble,
Babbling vibrations, distorting matter, it's progression.
