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Prana.

rewiiired

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Prana.
10/19/03

Get over it, she says,
but you keep feeding it:
killing me, killing me.
Queen of ambivalence,
leave me here just breathing in:
suffocating me, so strangling.

So just wrap around and strangle me.
Ignore yesterday’s promises.
I could live if you’d murder me.
Ignore the perspective you left behind.
I’m wrapped in darkness, you are my light.
Give me a sexy gaze, then look away.
You could be peace, so it’s worth the fight.
I’m going to corner you, tie you down one day.

You’ll smile on to the end
drowning in the darkest pleasant
both anchored in a sacred act of release
spread and thin the lines between you and me.

Stop receeding, leaving me
here to hold my ever deeper breaths.
I need this, don’t you owe this to me?
 
As per usual, your poetry is extremely well worded and beautifully put. Your imagery and emotive language is also eloquent and descriptive. :)

Cheers & thanks for posting this one. :)

-plaz out-
 
prana is breath and a girls name too... I like the way you tied that thought through this, its very eloquent.
 
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