Poetry by me..no title

[KBeesH]

Both eyes open and mouth shut
I ask the questions you say what
Calming atmosphere clouds up high
Headful of thoughts we all lie
No sense of direction no sense of time
So much beauty so much crime
Living is hard dieing is tragic
Think with your heart love is magic



Well there it is..short and sweet..tell me wat u think

 

[(Wordy)]

Short and sweet is right, and ending in truth:

Think with your heart love is magic

The whole thing sounds like it should be sung / put to music?

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[Raz]

I didn't like it at first to be honest, but it has grown on me....I think it is really sweet. I like the optimism.

 

[KBeesH]

Thank you...I'll post more poetry soon..