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fUzzUr

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Lima, oHIGHo
Please give me some info. Are they good, are they bad, what can i do to make them better, do u understand them, do u have a question about them, anything!
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Plurified
I was having a wonderful time
Laughing and dancing isn’t a crime
I focused all of my being into keeping the vibe
I never, ever felt more alive
I connected with so many minds
Meshing and melding, feeling combined
Wanting them all to smile for a time
Hoping that they felt the same vibe
I smiled as I wandered from side to side
Grooving and moving to the beats time
Stopping and talking to a new friend of mine
Sharing a thought as well as a vibe
Did you have fun to?
Was it all-true?
Did you feel it to?
Did the vibe flow through you?
I know I had a wonderful time
I hope I got a smile as you walked by
I had never felt more alive
I pray that you felt the same vibe.
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Here is one of my darker, and in my opinion better written poems
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Pieces
Hope that it will go back together
This puzzle that tumbled and fell away
Remember the picture that was once beheld
Now is ruble, random and strayed
Smile and start to work forever
Piecing together the fallen dead
Toiling endlessly to fit these pieces
Losing the picture in your head
Hope to stop it before its lost forever
Praying to just fade away
The picture is gone and not returning
But work constantly anyway
Roll your eyes and sigh disappointed
Bang your heads and lay down your woe
Slam it, rip it, run in terror
Before the puzzle swallows you whole
Pray you can piece it back together
Hope that you can believe that lie
The puzzle isn’t fitting as it did before
Stop and sit and laugh and cry
Rip it, slam it, start all over
Piece together what you can and will
The picture is no longer remembered
And has faded to little more than nill
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Be Happy
Smile, Come on and try
Laugh, because then you won’t cry
Smile at a cloudy sky
Laugh as you say g’bye
Smile, for a change
Laugh as you go through the day
Smile at the soothing rain
Laugh to forget your pain
Smile, just for me
Laugh at the days stupidity
Smile at life’s sublimity
Laugh to set you free
Smile, Come on and try
Laugh so you can get by
Smile at a twinkling sky
Laugh as you wish to fly
Smile, Im asking please
Laugh at what fate can bring
Smile at diversity
Laugh because it sets you free
Be happy for me.
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Word
I never knew what I could do
I didn’t see this part of me
I didn’t smile like a child
I never heard the real word
Is this true, what I can do?
Can it be that this is me?
I can smile for a while?
I enjoyed the word I hear
I never knew it could be true
Its still me but it cant be
I am a child when I smile
Fun is the word I heard
It isn’t new but it still holds true
I see that it can be
Be a child for a while
Now ive really heard the word
Its not new what I can do
Watch for me so you can see
Be a child and just smile
The word really must be heard
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Think Please
Think before you speak
But save your critique
Just try to see
What your words can bring
Think before you move
But keep feeling the groove
Know that it is true
See what your moves can do
Think before you choose
But save the abuse
Try and keep your cool
But know that you can lose
Think before you believe
But save the “if you please”
See what you can see
Know your eyes can deceive
Think before you do
Save a part of you
You always knew
So don’t play the fool
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Stitched
I am frozen, frosted over
I have lost all movement now
But im still chasing and racing
Like I have since 3rd grade
I am tiny, speck of nothing
A miniscule effect of nothing big
As long as im alive
Im still doing what I should
I have fallen, face in gutter
Breathing in the sludge of years
But still smelling
The smell of decay
I have mended, bandaged over
Healing the hurt that last forever
Starting the scaring
Feeling im ok
I have followed, lead to nowhere
Going the way the finger points
Quickly erasing the rebelling faze
I made to block away
Who are YOU and have YOU seen it to?
I have struggled, tribulation
Stressed to whitened knuckles
Pounding on the door
I locked myself
I am alive, next to nothing
Seeing this life in tainted bliss
Falling and clawling
No change
I am broken, stitched together
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Not all my poems are happy or kandi kidish (its a lot easier apparently to write poems that are sad). If you want to see more ill email it to you, or if enough people like it maybe ill post some more on here.
I hope you like it and either send me some of yours or post it here.
 
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