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Poem.....2 become one

Liquid69Raver

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This was a little something I wrote this week while I was high.This is like the first poem I have ever written so let me know what you think.
I look into your eyes
and its just like the early morning sky
Beatiful and at peace
where no problems are
Like a fire that burns from within
where no pain is felt
Just the warm glow
of 2 becomming one
No words,no pain
we'll go dreamin
where all your hopes
and fantasys become true
where 2 can become one
to a place of total ecstasy
a place where you can cry on my shoulder
where we can share our deepest thoughts
where we can take two souls and become one
We can go to a place where everything is one
where there is no trouble
no heart ache,no problems
just a place where everything is for you
No words,no pain
we'll go dreamin
where all your hopes
and fantasys become true
where 2 can become one
Beatiful,like the stars on a moonlite night
like the sunset on the beach
like a heaven sent angel
like the single rose that stands out in my garden of life
You are like the sounds of the ocean
comming in at night
like the love I never had
the soul that was meant for me
No words,no pain
we'll go dreamin
where all your hopes
and fantasys become true
where 2 can become one
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Welcome to a place where fantasy's come true.....welcome to esctasy.
 
I don't know whether to just be happy or to cry this is so beautiful. If I had to talk right now I couldn't cos my throat is all ready to cry... *sigh*
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
Please don't interrupt me. That last sentence took a lot of effort to think of and now I have to think of another one.
 
That's really sweet Liquid. Sounds like you got it bad for this chick. Best of luck dude.
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(sniff) OMG, that is so sweet. Dude, If this girl doesnt get with...I will...LMAO.
Good luck with it,
Dave
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uh Dave,thanxs for the offer but we all know I belive in adam and eve not adam and steve.It just dont work like that.
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damn that is nice. i can relate to the chemical love i feel on X.
once again well done
bTs
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Ah!!! so he did post it!!!
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!!!
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