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chrissy

chrissy

Ex-Bluelighter
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i feel i shouldn't invade upon this uncharted territory
that's supposed to be yours alone,
but yet again
like many times before,
i can't help it.

wondering eyes,
wandering hands,
tongue afraid yet keen to explore
heart on your sleeve:
you innocent fool.

so fragile, so honest:
your naive smiles draw me closer into you
and i must...
i must...
alter.

you let me.
because you don't know any better
and i'm found asking myself
was i like this too?
in the beginning?

pure innocence
how i delight in that
but i can't help but feel guilt
of my indulgent sin
when i show you the way.

there are no boundaries
perhaps in time, you'll put some up
perhaps it's better that you start now.
take it from me-
they come in handy.

i'm sick of all the hurt,
broken promises and pain
that many men before have so kindly
dished out to me.
don't let the same happen to you- i don't want to be your first.

but i can't help but feel guilt
of my indulgent sin
when i show you the way.
 
great job chrissy. you write with so much emotion, just like me. its a shame i dont get to see you more often. unspoken words at random philly parties just doesnt cut it ;)
 
there are no boundaries
perhaps in time, you'll put some up
perhaps it's better that you start now.
take it from me-
they come in handy.

i'm sick of all the hurt,
broken promises and pain
that many men before have so kindly
dished out to me.
don't let the same happen to you- i don't want to be your first.
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this section stood out to me from your whole peice. its made me think of certain things which is good. i like a peice that provokes thinking on my half. nice job :)
 
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