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hahahahah this is truly dope
 
Here are a couple of pictures of me and my fiancée, who I will be seeing tomorrow night for the first time in over 2 months!

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^ is me and I will now post my latest poem that i know some people will hate:

It is Five AM, I'm gone Bunny Blastin
While it may seem cruel, makes me feel fantastic!

As the Sun rises my tired eyes widen.
Thrice I've cleaned my deathstick- like the trident of Posiden

An animal dies, I feel more alive
As it screams out and cries
I rush to seal it's eyes.

So it won't tell god it was murdered by a man
and which man.

murdered for pleasure, forordained nintendo gamed.

I only shoot with a twenty-two
a big jack rabbit can take more than one or two.
and still hop along, ears hung low
trying to hide in the brush below
but as it whimpers, its own eulogy
I've followed its trail of blood and pity

for itself, and its desire to live.
to survive and mate and bring up kids.
yes, it can.

It can make me sad.
Am I so bad?

I blast bunnys to feel more alive
as it cries, i follow its whimpers, I seal its eyes
with humane point-blank bangs

and I am hypnotized, by the rapid leg-still-shakin
wondering if the bunny could still awaken

and yes I wear a hat, as not to be tracked
from above and beyond- god frowns

looking down
from
Kolob-Land
he understands the reason, this hobby -and

Wait! there goes another: Hopity-Hop-Hop BANG!

-Andrew Dransfield

P.S. I do the above activity on 40mgs of adderall usually...
 
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Do you guys like my poem? im kind of an amatuer, but i am currently majoring in Literature.
I know this is about pics (which ive linked) (couldnt figure how to just post the .jpg)
but I would REALLY appreciate some feedback!
 
Hi Motiv311,

If you're looking for feedback, it's probably best to start a new thread rather than posting poetry in here, where we only want to see your pretty face. ;) Feel free to start a new thread, posting this poem again. :)

Oh and by the way, the link to your photo doesn't seem to work - but it could just be me?
 
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Fratopia (I am not in a frat)

Who gives a fuck about the Other?
Everything is ultimately
Created by your mind
I am forms on a page
I am a projection of
Your nerves
Formed by interacting
With my existence.
There is no other way
Ish sense in Self
Though integrated
Structured organizations
Of Mind and Body Consilience
Spirit and Material
Active and Passive
Unifying Dual Delusion
Sun Day You and I both pursue
Monday Dueling Someday
Imagine Ideal Entities
Enmeshed relations of
Abundant Balanced Creations
Of energy, power of life
In Air, breath of life
In Water, liquid of life
In Food, life of powerful
Slove, loving movement
Selfish social sexual love
Actively Purified through
Pourous Waste Management
Sheltered in perfect company
Your health Secured
by trusted professionals
In light harmony with
My Skilled Techno-Homy
Crafting omni-faceted
Value for our family.

Liberty equality fraternity
too much liberty = anarchy
too much equality = failure of communism
fraternity = Just right
 
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uuum... not sure if Im exactly a poet, but I am one of the few sane people in this world... so maybe I am. LOL

here I am! god damn i:m a stud, all ya ladies better back up off me. cuz i dress to impress, got bitches hollarin at me from the east to the west.

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Oh yah, how the hell do I post a picture? hehe does it have to be from the net? or can i link somethin from my computer without have a herd of nerds tryin to hack my computer?
 
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