"Pepper"

[malakaix]

I wrote this the day my dog of 11 years was put down sometime last year, i enjoy writing but often struggle expressing myself, for some reason i was clearly able to express exactly how i felt at that moment in these few short sentences. It was my first experience with the 'death' of someone close to me.


A wholeness fills me
while the void slips away
and yet i feel confused
as i lost my friend today

Embroiled with emotions
but numb to the touch
a stagnant image of myself
sits quietly in the past

Moving on and up
but without goal or direction
i sit back within the mythic
and contemplate my distinction

 

[panic in paradise]

A wholeness fills me
while the void slips away
and yet i feel confused
as i lost my friend today

life?

Embroiled with emotions
but numb to the touch
a stagnant image of myself
sits quietly in the past

love??

Moving on and up
but without goal or direction
i sit back within the mythic
and contemplate my distinction

light


... is how i see it anyway, perfect - from here.
sounds like the honest salt of

 

[malakaix]

Wow, thank-you PiP for providing me with your perspective of my writings, that's opened up a new way of viewing it for me.. i feel those three words resonate well with the motions i was going through and still feel in their vibrancy.

 

[panic in paradise]

hehe
;-)

it isnt my perspective only, you just used it yourself it seems - it is an ingrained recipe ... there is no awareness of that brings it - only acceptance which is a big Only...


Life Love & Light
allow learn & create
see hold & let-go



starting ~ over ~ again

 

[panic in paradise]

i really like this,,, ive come back to read it several times now, and each time it holds the same purity, but even more so in ways because each time there is more relation or something; seems less ''simple'' but more pure and potent; established and pronounced...


got anymore?

 

[malakaix]

Thankyou PiP i really appreciate the feedback

Unfortunatley this is the only piece of writing that developed into something of heart to me; everything else i've jotted down has just been thoughts and ideas, i hope to write more in time.