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neverwas

neverwas

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The yellow brick road!
here's a little newsflash,
if you can get your head around.
light a smoke.
grab a drink.
but dont you dare make a sound.

im saying goodbye.
that is what you want.
you've reduced me to tears.
im tierd of fending off your lies.

i do believe in second chances
but not when my soul is dead.
are your ears burning yet?
or are they not on fire yet.

come on.
you can take it.
you seem to love to dish it.
remember darling.
oh my sweet.
what goes around comes around.
for soon it will be your turn.

why are you so quiet?
i can still hear all your bullshit.
nothing that is said
by you oh so few
is just or true.

so hear's a few thoughts
id like to say.
because after this,
I LEAVE.
I WALK AWAY.

fuck you because i loved you.
fuck you for loving you to.
i dont need a reason
to hate you the way i do.

leave me alone.
stop interferring in my life.
you mean nothing to me.
why dont you guys try to backstab me
with a real fucking knife.

im sick of what you do to me.
tearing people down
just to build yourself up.

so i bid you all farewell
for tonight im going to die.
it is only when i am dead
that my bleeding heart
will only cease to cry.

im walking away
with those i love in hand.
they are not blind
nor their minds
thick like sand.

so i burn the olive branch of peace
try to think of something to say.
all i can come up with is a
FUCK YOU AND HAVE A NICE DAY...


:|Note: Italic lyrics from Marilyn Manson,Para-nior (The Golden Age Of Grotesque) and Eminem-8Mile.
 
*starfalls69* said:


what goes around comes around.
for soon it will be your turn.

why are you so quiet?
i can still hear all your bullshit.
nothing that is said
by you oh so few
is just or true.
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oh, the sweet irony =D.

i love it!! raw, gutsy, karma personified.

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*starfalls69* said:

im saying goodbye.
that is what you want.
you've reduced me to tears.
im tired of fending off your lies.

what goes around comes around.
for soon it will be your turn.
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Nice work ;)

Karma's a bitch hey? But then sometimes what comes around was meant to come around. Saying goodbye? Then it'd mean you've admitted defeat.

Take care :)
 
Saying goodbye? Then it'd mean you've admitted defeat.
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sometimes it takes the bigger person to walk away...

i really liked this... the words are chosen very well and the flow is awesome. loved it hun =D
 
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I found this to be quite an interesting and acerbic read. A good dose of anger and frustration can often make for interesting words or lyrics. Manson certainly provides good inspiration and direction in those moods. Though there are some inherent contradictions in the lyrics, the feeling it was written through comes through unaltered and raw. :)

I also must admit, I'm cynically amused at the subtext both of this poem, and at the replies as well. As with many things, what's left unsaid is as significant as what is stated openly. So perhaps if everyone concerned could restrain themselves from throwing these sugar coated barbs of unpleasentness at each other, this corner of the would could become and stay a pleasant place.

"An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind" - His Holiness the Dalai Lama.

I'll leave you on that note.

-plaz out-
 
hope nothing too serious is up hon...

Nice job on getting some of the hurt out of your system though. SOmetimes it takes a really strong piece to truely empty yourself of these emotions. :)
 
Cosmic Mist said:
hope nothing too serious is up hon...
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Saying goodbye? Then it'd mean you've admitted defeat.
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sometimes it takes the bigger person to walk away...


ive been fighting with some deamons for quite a while now...and lately have to come realise that walking away from it all...not being defeated... but merely being the grown person and walking away is the only thing that can be done.

i am moving on in my life and it was way past its useby date. im not moving on for any person who thinks they have made me move on. this peice was not even written with any person in mind! it was written out my own anger, hurt and frustration. i am not moving on because others have moved on. i am moving on for my own well being.

god i wasnt even going to reply to this...
 
Saying goodbye? Then it'd mean you've admitted defeat.
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Sometimes I don't agree with that one... people get a real power trip off your weaknesses...

I'm glad your brave enough to walk away... saying fuck you and sticking to it is a good way of closing terms within yourself..

Don't worry, this person will get their own, what they deserve.

What doesn't kills you makes you stronger... but always makes you aware of the next choices that lie ahead of you..

Good luck.. your officially reborn again...;)
 
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