outrageous plagiarism, or: optimistic?

[onetwothreefour]

in the past passion wasn't strange,
and a poet was just one who

whiteloved life
white-----spaceand;
whitelived life
white-----spaceand;
whitedug life
white-----spaceand he;

swung with life from the rafters one
crazy acrobat in the circus, the world

cackling with glee or steaming with
furious outrage at the injustices
that sought to cage him in orchestral
anger at a world he only wanted to

white-----spacesee;

but he wrote and he wandered and he
wondered, and eventually he came to
this place - unhappy still -
but thinking and feeling, full of

white-----spacejoy;

...and his glory at its sight
was just what he'd been seeking.

--

i've been reading lots of ginsberg and kerouac lately

 

[katmeow]

Dude, I totally dig what you write. Love the layout of this too.

It's great

 

[up all night]

Oh wow I didn't know you'd posted this here.

As I said before, I really love this piece. It has understated strength that I'm sure you didn't even know was there and I think you should definitely explore this style more because it suits you.

 

[human paraquat]

real cool, cat..i dig it

ginsberg is god to me, check out "the complaint of the skeleton to time", or something aong those lines

 

[jaymie]

Ahh, certainly captures the moment, don't it?

 

[cherub]

definately impressive as i am with all your work when you post in here. Nice to see you again. and Thank you for sharing with us. Definately a must read !

 

[harraser]

fucken excellent! great style.

 

[ForTheRush]

Its so true though jesus that really struck a chord, Kerouac and Kesey are untouchable gods that sprout up only few per generation...............

 

[onetwothreefour]

thanks all, i really appreciate all the compliments; made my night

up all night: it's a really unrestrictive way to write, i think (even though it probably looks quite structured), which is why it's enjoyable. thanks

human paraquat: i love that poem! nice choice... "a poem's crazy tone" is exactly the best thing about his work.

 

[neverwas]

excellent work hunny

 

[Pomplemous]

you are good!!!!

 

[Cat Again]

...really goog

 

[RareForm]

I haven't seen much of your stuff...but the few that i've seen are absolutely breath-taking...

you belong here! :D

 

[katmeow]

Because this deserves to be read by more people.

 

[(Wordy)]

I'm loving your bumps, katmeow!

This poem is breathtaking! Has all the verve and elocution of Ginsberg...

 

[up all night]

^ He would have loved to hear you say that! I miss 1234. Wish the bastard still posted, if only in here.

 

[Raz]

Good bump! I like this piece..