Outcome

[bow-viper1]

The man who lives to preserve life shall always triumph over those who wish for it to be taken.
But it is the man who has naught for which to live who holds the true power, for he has no bounds.

 

[TheDeceased]

Thy speaketh the truth.

Good morrow to you, sir.

"Thy" means "your", so the translation is: "Your man who lives to preserve life..." Also the semi-colon should be a comma. I'm not sure why you're writing in partial middle-English, or if it's a quote of some kind. If it's not a quote, I would suggest writing it in English and breaking it up a little bit into shorter lines.

 

[bow-viper1]

Thy speaketh the truth.

Good morrow to you, sir.

"Thy" means "your", so the translation is: "Your man who lives to preserve life..." Also the semi-colon should be a comma. I'm not sure why you're writing in partial middle-English, or if it's a quote of some kind. If it's not a quote, I would suggest writing it in English and breaking it up a little bit into shorter lines.

Thanks for the constructive criticism!

I have no idea why I wrote it in partial middle-English either hahah... it's just how it came out.

I also thought about breaking it up into shorter lines but just couldn't figure out where to do so.