open says a me

[goodnitestar]

lets just lay it down
limiting the comfort within
a million miles from anywhere
somewhere our minds fall short
instead of rushing to the call

nothing matters
and we pry on each subset
as though the last malison
was not our own

placing aggrade assassins to the job
once intangable to me
only you could play out
this taken scene

 

[cherub]

i really liked what was written, but in my honest opinion i feel there is more to it,, may just be me but i like what was written good job !!!!

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Hey Babes

It's me Bunny, we met at Funk'n No Where. I'd like to say that honestly I don't get it. And that is a little odd given the fact that a lot of things I do get.

If you don't mind could you please post what this piece means to you and then perhaps off of that I'll comprehend it a little more. I only ask because I met you and you did not seem to be like the kind of person that would be a offended by that kind of request.

Thanks Babes

 

[PsychoKitten]

I like it, I really do, but i'm with cherub... it seems almost unfinished.

 

[neverwas]

nice

 

[goodnitestar]

with your gun in your hand
reasoning to the ground
no one wll find out
you killed me twice now

leaving your actions
to whatever happens next

just living on mindless
insanitys bliss