one day sorrow

[goodnitestar]

I think its beautiful
that couple on the street holding hands , waving away the crowd, ignorance , bliss in forgeting
Shuddering now, as before no , cant be happy for them anymore
Bringing a passion , a anger , a sorrow filled sigh
And in my misery
selfishness fills thickend skulls
tear filled mind
floading places where smiles are all you see
anxious feet hurry away
blocking out the hands held, and the smiles,
the love .....
kisses for christal
a childlike dream
for a childlike girl
immaturity Ive defeated once or twice
left to dignaty
left to this
where is it now , wheres the bravery
lying
waiting for my one true love to hold my hand , smile and walk with me now
a single plea to heavens empty clouds*
So far away from a time once so near, so empty a swollen hearts desire, yet loneliness is company enouph for now, with all these possible new fates, I cant stand to be with
cant even talk to another without getting sick , fading off into thoughts of you , tearing at my door
and I let you in , every time you ask
when will this intimate denial , of what you really want from me pass
oh i long to breath , to breath
one day without your oxygen
[ 19 September 2002: Message edited by: goodnitestar ]

 

[star*]

This is awesome.

 

[Jungle Bunny]

"Wow"- and I say that honestly. You paint a picture so conceivable with a constant string of obscure thoughts. It is an honor, that you left the narrative free. It allows me the option to insert myself. If I was thinking all these things, that in truth I really do, the spin on your piece becomes more personable. For this I thank you. If these thoughts ran through my crumpled little head. My heart would, and does, scream at the injustice. Couples often take for granted the affections they publicly display. In times of old and memories of new it is unwise to express my affection and that leaves me metaphorically "blue".
[ 19 September 2002: Message edited by: Jungle Bunny ]
[ 19 September 2002: Message edited by: Jungle Bunny ]