On the other side

[Angelight]

On the other side of the world i wondered what he was doing...
On the other side of the street he walked.
On the other side of the bed he layed next to me.
On the other side of the line we talked.
On the other side of time he believed in me.
On the other side of the world he breathed me.
On the other side of town he still new.
In another way he killed me.
In another lifetime he grew.
On the other side of the world he missed me.
On the other side this life i despised him.
On the other side of the room he could reach me.
In another life time i loved him.
I hated him when he loved me.
I loved him when he hated me.
Thats how its goes....thats how it went...
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this is the most random thing i ever wrote...but i thought i'd post it anyway...how unfortunate time is, how lucky i am that it is.
all my love
ange
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"Try my exctasy... "

 

[Petersko]

Doesn't seem random at all. Sounds like you put a lot of thought into it.
I like.

 

[CARESS]

Beautiful piece, Angel. I love reading your work. I think this is one of my favorites so far. Keep writing, sweetie. It's in your blood.
Love,
Caress

 

[writnpage]

WOAH!!!!!! Angelight!!!!! That send chills down my spine. It's the most realistic romantic poem I've ever read. Natural, flowing, real and intense. Thank you for writing that.
Keep it flowing sweetie.
Luvs,
-Amina
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen

 

[Angelight]

thanks girls

you don't know how much it means to hear these wonderful words. I was so unsure about this one. *sigh* i luv u guys *hugs*
angel

 

[Goddess]

Angel, this is a nice poem.

 

[xtremeink]

Angel,
That poem was anything but random. It was right on the mark. Except for the aftermath. I know more relationships that stay in tact because the two people in it trade love-hate roles, as dysfunctional as that seems. It's more a rule than an exception. I don't know of many love-love or hate-hate relationships.
Peace,
xtremeink
[This message has been edited by xtremeink (edited 21 July 2000).]

 

[Angelight]

just doing my share of glowing today

much love
angel

 

[DaveB]

That was an excellent poem. Well written and beautiful. I just discovered this section the other day, and if other people's work is half as good as yours, I'm going to like it!