Nose-Dive

[Manne]

Matchbox hands and a scent of phosphorus
Oh Green, make me Black and tear asunder
Dried veins and creaking skin
As fall departs and winter impedes

A mound of decay quick turns to ash

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Short but rich in imagery!

 

[yakksoho]

Oh Green, make me Black

Excellent! Incredibly talented writing.
power in brevity
passion in pain
and beauty in decay

 

[cherub]

yeah i like this alot,,, shows a great style to your writting,,

 

[Manne]

WOW! The mods like it! Thanks guys for all of the compliments, I appreciate it, really