no title just emo`

[shasta]

theres an overwhelming emptiness
stirring deep within my soul
a hollow feeling deep inside
like nothing ive ever known
i try to erase the pain the anger
but life is just to hard
i feel like a strager
like i dont know myself anymore
i look to myself and need to change
but this life i cant endure
the pain is getting worse now
with every breathe i take
sometimes i start to wonder how
this happiness i can fake
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im gonna walk through the halls playing wow shes dumb by homegrown and the first girl that approaches me and says shes not dumb im gonna prapose to.....on the spot.....yay

 

[Haza]

Nice post buddddddddddy!
it kinda makes me sad when people dont reply to things i work hard on, keep up the writing
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~Why be emo and cry about her all day, when you can be metal and go to her house, kidnap her and lock her in your basement so she'll be yours forever. ~Mackey

 

[shasta]

i heart haza
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im gonna walk through the halls playing wow shes dumb by homegrown and the first girl that approaches me and says shes not dumb im gonna prapose to.....on the spot.....yay

 

[SexayRaverHere]

wow, very deep, I felt like i was looking in a mirror

 

[ice-9]

emotionally charged...keep writing, you ain't alone.

 

[cherub]

definately a poem with strong feelings and imput, I enjoyed it alot, yes,, definately keep writing.