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Dagny

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If any of you have ever read The New Yorker then you have seen the poems they post randomly throughout the magazine. Most are great, all are well written... and tonight this one just got me.
-written by David Semanki
Night
You became real to me
the first time you were lost to me.
You were dressing
in front of the bedroom mirror,
studying your reflection
as if looking for signs
of what
passion had accomplished,
the idea of need extinguished-
damp skin of sheets; the rain lifting;
your bare shoulder blades,
their deceptive strength.
How could I not have been moved
to grief
to witness
your entry back into the unpardonable
structure of the present?
Love of my life, this was years ago.
Should it matter to us
anymore? Or that when my eyes were closed,
my left ear resting above your heart
heard: Careful. Careful.
 
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that ending ROCKED, but my favorite lines were by far, the first:
You became real to me
the first time you were lost to me.
oh, those words ring so true!
please share more with us....
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E-girl
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"There's a part of me, that i forgot to be. Take a look and see, the light still shines in me." ~~ Milk, Inc.
 
You wanted more??? Aly will get the full impact of this... just imagine a fine-ass Lorenz Tate standing at a microphone, a bass playing behind him... and every woman in the audience with drool on her chin... go ahead and dribble, this is toooooo hot...
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Say baby, can I be your slave
I've got to admit girl, you're the shit girl
And I'm diggin' you like a grave
Now do they call you daughter to the spinnin post, or
Or maybe Queen of 2,000 moons
Sister to the distant, yet risin' star
Is your name Yimmy-Ya
Oh hell nah, it's got to be Oshun
Ooo, is that a smile me put on your face child
Wide as a field of Jasmine and Glover
Talk that talk honey, walk that walk money
Hound legs that'll spank Jehovah
Shit, who am I?
It's not important
But they call me Brother to the Night
And right now
I'm the blues in your left thigh
Tryin to become the funk in your right
Who am I?
I'll be whoever you say
But right now, I'm the sight raped hunter
Blindly pursuing you as my prey
And I just wanna give you injections, of sublime erections
And get you to dance to my rhythm
Make you dream archaetypes, of black angels in flight
Upon wings, of distorted, contorted, metaphoric jism
Come on slim
Fuck yo' man, I ain't worried about him
It's you who I wanna step to my scene
Cause rather than deal with the fallacy
Of this dry ass reality
I rather dance and romance your sweet ass, in a wet dream
Who am I?
Well they all call me Brother to the Night
And right now, I'm the blues in your left thigh
Trying to become the funk in your right
Is that alright
 
Oh dear...I'm having a vapor....
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A mystery inside an enigma wrapped in something orange and fuzzy....
"Ed Meese should be ass-fucked by an acid-crazed elk."-Dr. Hunter S. Thompson
"This is what you get,
When you mess with Us."-Radiohead, "Karma Police"
 
Ooohhhhhhhhh Guuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrllllllllll!!!
It's you who I wanna step to my scene
Cause rather than deal with the fallacy
Of this dry ass reality
I rather dance and romance your sweet ass, in a wet dream
You know that's my shit....I can see his fine ass now...UmmmmmUmmmmm
**asks fizzy to pick her up some of them there batteries while she's at it**
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[This message has been edited by alykitty (edited 12 October 2001).]
 
I'm the blues in your left thigh
Tryin to become the funk in your right
thank you once again, dags.
/me thinks of Ice9 picture with the braids in his hair and him gettin all scruffy from not shaving.
No, no, iceeie... thank you.
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