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Tribal Hybridz

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The words you sing I have heard a thousand times sung,
whats the problem, this shit has only begun!
We are all destined to die, forever dreamth of flight. I fear the clouds billowing in my imagination are just puffs of smoked exaggeration.
How can it be, this evil in me, made me to fuckin blind to see? This hole must be neverending, it just spirals down to the filth of hell. I want out, but I wanted in, so now, tell me, where do we begin? Is this how the story ends? or is it simpily just where it begins? I have no remorse walking the path of the forgotten, and I will always have love for the unbegotten. For your hate is the fuel to the fire that burns my soul, raging out of control, never more shall I cast away myself for you, the one who never said one word true. A million soldiers just like me, ready to start the Peace War that will last all eternity. Until Christ himself comes only to be crucified by all, because now, look, only the meak shall rise, with your Savior, you think there is compromise? You are only tricking yourself to be what you think is opposite to what they want, but they have reversed beliefs of whats right. So now tell me, who was played the fool, was it me, was it you? I shall fall into conformacy never more, today is the time to take back what is mine, raise your hands if your agreed, tell me now, do you want to be freed? Flight is inevitable, now shall we parish in this hell hole? For these wings on my back are bruised and scabbed, my heart has been beaten and selfishly stabbed. I am ready, for thou hast nothing more to lose.
 
I like this piece a lot. I know exactly what you are trying to say. It would be easier to read if you broke it up a little bit though...instead of in just a big paragraph...Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work... I'd like to read more of your stuff some time.
PLUR
Utopia
 
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