nevermind (but it's raining)

[vurtomatic]

forever is ever is never is
five a.m. it's raining a scalding
cant see for the tears

never is ever is too long
to not hold you touch you
breathe you love

you were forever and not
anymore nevermore but more
just a little bit more

forever was my heaven never
is my hell ever was a question
and yes you answered

ever i wonder still and never
understand but i stand here
waiting for an ever

"nevermind" you said and i
feel never an ever
widening gulf

one word and it still hurts
i hate myself for feeling ever
never expected never

but it's raining five a.m. is puddling
i'm wet my heart is shivering
and i love you still

 

[katmeow]

Beautiful!!

:D

 

[neverwas]

well vurt u continue to touch me with ur peices...uve been silent recently

i really liked this one...had to read it twice cause of the tongue twisting way its worded but is still nothing shotr of amazing.

me being the confused girl i am really related to the heart ache and other feelings i picke dup on through it.

lots of credit given for the way it is worded...specailly the first few stansas...i really liked it

(for a peice u apparently just threw together it doesnt seem so )

nice job

kel

 

[katmeow]

Vurt...

I wish you were still posting here. I miss your work and its simple eloquence.

 

[(Wordy)]

Ditto!