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[Android]

Staring into dim yellow
Familiar iridescent glow.
Winds of change throughout the night
Alleviate this torn man's plight.
To bask forever in this gold
To live a life which none foretold.
Staring deep into the sun
Living life already done.
Feeling warmth envelope me.
On aged sands down by the sea.
Oh the chances I once took
Now with disdain, life by the book.
Shall it always be the same?
Living life in guilt and shame?
What is really in a name?
The answer here is pretty plain.

 

[plazma]

A very nice, and contemplative feeling piece.

I very much approve.

-plaz out-

 

[Nietzche]

I do not think your poems lame.

 

[Android]

I do not think your poems lame.

Yes it is nice to finally get some respect as opposed to something along the lines of "for the sake of humanity, you should not write lyrics/poems" so I thank you both.

 

[katmeow]

I'm not normally a fan of rhyming poetry, but this is an exception.

I can't single out a particular part I like most.

Nice work

 

[Android]

I'm not normally a fan of rhyming poetry, but this is an exception.

I can't single out a particular part I like most.

Nice work

PErhaps it just takes good rhyming poetry to make one appreciate the style?

 

[Cat Again]

i think its a beautifull poe. is it about beleiving in god?

 

[Android]

^^^
This poem is what you make of it.