My Stupidity

[Altered_Soul9]

I unravel at your feet.
My face the last thing to fall
I force myself
To believe I'll be together again.
Once back together I crumble.
Pieces shower upon you.
You place them back together with hate and lies.
Filling in the missing pieces with Lust.
I gain nothing from you.
You take everything from me.
As the memories flood my mind.
The days when things were...

My stupidity~~

Love has eluded my soul.
It's ran to the corners of my mind.
And hid behind your false truths.
And yet you hold me close.
Knowing i'm unable to pull away.
Paralyzed by your eyes.
Knowing that you...

My stupidity~~

Eats away at my amputated self.
I hate the life I've conjured up.
Hung up in a cyclone of deceit.
You laugh your laugh
And scorn my enlightement.
My stupidity glides thru this all
Knowing its knowledge is beyond abnormal.
Knowing its end has been awoken.

Develop your lies to combat my stupidity....

 

[RareForm]

Great poem dude.....i really liked it.

 

[Pasilda Nacera]

Word!

 

[-|Twiztd|-]

I am astonished at the complexity of this: A+ AS9:

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^ I second that! Great work!

 

[neverwas]

I unravel at your feet.
My face the last thing to fall
I force myself
To believe I'll be together again.
Once back together I crumble.
Pieces shower upon you.

your wording in this peice was outstanding. full of emotions. so many of em

 

[cherub]

Loved this:

I was drawn to this,,, cause as I get older, i realize we ALL
our drawn to our own destruction forgetting the that things
are not always what they seem and in the long run. They were not self destructive. But self perserving.

 

[up all night]

Great work.