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Chelli

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Feeling sad no longer feels... 'bad'

Like I know I've got to go through what I've got to
and I wish I could explain it but
my tears don't give me the same heavy pain in my chest
but instead my mind feels clear, so I'll try with no fear

Just pure release

like I know that it's right,
Like non-violently fighting to keep shining bright,

Like my vision gets clouded, so I allow myself to cry

and much like the sky
tears pour from my eyes

because deep under my sadness there's a love so real
and it's fueled by the natural ability to feel.
Love brings light, and light brings life,
and finally, I can say it right.

This light shines bright enough to overcome darkness, fear
So in my sadness
I still sparkle like the beauty of my tears.

and it honestly feels like they nourish the green,
because once the blue's released
there's a decrease in the pressure
and it's more refreshing than the fresh air
after a rinse session
in a hot room,
or the like day after shrooms,
and you take a nice toke of some heavenly smoke,
or water with ice on a hot summers day
or a psychedelic night.

At the end of last epic, tripped out summer,

A wise, old, Chinese lady
held my hand and soulfully told me,

It's okay to be sad, we go through bad times in our lives,
and if you can still feel,
then you know you're still real,

and that's all you'll ever need to heal.
 
I must say I'm really bad at explaining myself, expressing some of these things so I'm not posting very many of mine
 
my friend wrote this: " holy fucking fantastic i thought you were drastic but now i see i got my ass kicked, its like a cerebral cathedral playing out all kinds of rhythm and its like ive been given a message to speak the peace about belief. i need relief in this occasion my mind state is raisin i will always be braving the ulterior assault thats why i exceed my limits its no gimmick im in it to win it so bring it or drop the score cause im busting down the door its an open floor for consciousness im into this theory its like tim leary when he had this potion, a notion of enlightenment through a semi-natural element. Sediments eroding your craniums exploding like the guns im holding, but overflowing too much algorithm i need a system of simple efficiency i need to see some kind of relevance to speak to me this LSD its potentiating creativity in me so let the light that lives in love uncover because its really
LOokseediscoVEr
L S D"

so i wrote

"argh, I just wrote a rhyme but like many other times I fucked up and pressed the wrong button so all my words went down the drain, how frusterating but it's nothing like real pain so I live to write another day,

Wow, all I really have to say is that this is amazing, and the things that you say, you express them in the most perfect way, it gives me so much hope to know that it can still be spoken. this may not come out right cos its the third time Im writing it but it would only be right to say something because that rhyme was AMAZING, you speak the truth and you manage to reach out and like a cosmic array of dancing colours and it reminds me of how simple and easy it is to reach a state of nirvana, it's impossible not to feel that way when someone else can say the most beautiful things in the most simple way,
I gotta say,
you really hit it with your flow, its more than a glow it's like an exploding light that shines brighter than a blazing fire and it really inspires me, its like reading the teachings of a wise adventurer with understanding and awareness of the higher power, and the feelings just blossom and grow like a lotus flower, and although some people think Im an ugly coward and others see me as gifted and showered with beauty, I don't even care because none of that matters, Im not scared, its who I am that counts and my intentions and what this is about, and I want to thank you in so many ways but for now I just really want to say that the universe needs some verses like this, to remind us of how beautiful is creativity and how intense it is to feel the truth and to still, to find
a way to express it,
complex, yet so simple,
it still blows my mind
this is really impressive,

Peace,
love, unity, respect"
(he liked it)
 
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