ahkuhstic
Bluelighter
i scribbled some feelings on a piece of paper the other day at work.. they are about this female that I met while visting my bestfriend at his college this past week. These words just fell from my head and i wrote them down that day.. i came home later and tried to piece together the scribbled lines into this piece..
This girl was something ot me i cant explain.. that why i wrote this..
((the following was critiqued by miss MaddHatter))
the words are all the same.. she just helped me place some in better places
‘..’
I know these words might sound crazy,
But this is truely how I feel,
At nite, only dreams of you,
Help my heart heal.
With daylight, the pain returns,
Oh how I wish it would fade,
Your touch felt so good,
A feeling I would never trade.
Everything I do in life,
Always seems to get me in a bind,
This is a prime example,
For I can't seem to get you out of my mind.
Your absense from my life,
Is making me insane,
Somehow writing these feelings down,
Helps release the pain.
I'm not certain why I write these words,
You'll probably just toss them away,
I basically just want you to know,
You were more to me than a one nite lay.
It was as if you were an angel sent,
To change my whole life,
The heavens brought us together,
But only for one night.
As I sit here at work,
This ink spills from my pen,
Love passed me so quickly,
On an intoxicating whim.
Feelings this strong,
Can only be expressed like this,
I drift through each day,
Just yearning for another sweet kiss.
You are the fairest of them all,
A beauty no one will ever surpass,
If you would only let me love you,
I promise it would last.
Many people have passed through my life,
This past year since I left her,
Yet you are the only one,
To truly make my heart pure.
Words can't be spoken,
That’s why I choose to write,
I just can't stand it anymore,
I can't be with out you one more nite.
Please try to understand,
I hope these words don’t cause a scare,
Its only my medium to express,
My true feelings for you Claire.
The distance maybe far,
But these feelings are far superior,
Since I met you,
Every woman seems inferior.
These words I have written,
I hope you don’t dismiss,
They started flowing from my mind,
So I couldn’t resist.
My only desire could be satisfied,
If I knew that you thought of me,
However, my pen comes to a stop,
I guess, I'll just let these feelings be.
This girl was something ot me i cant explain.. that why i wrote this..
((the following was critiqued by miss MaddHatter))
the words are all the same.. she just helped me place some in better places
‘..’
I know these words might sound crazy,
But this is truely how I feel,
At nite, only dreams of you,
Help my heart heal.
With daylight, the pain returns,
Oh how I wish it would fade,
Your touch felt so good,
A feeling I would never trade.
Everything I do in life,
Always seems to get me in a bind,
This is a prime example,
For I can't seem to get you out of my mind.
Your absense from my life,
Is making me insane,
Somehow writing these feelings down,
Helps release the pain.
I'm not certain why I write these words,
You'll probably just toss them away,
I basically just want you to know,
You were more to me than a one nite lay.
It was as if you were an angel sent,
To change my whole life,
The heavens brought us together,
But only for one night.
As I sit here at work,
This ink spills from my pen,
Love passed me so quickly,
On an intoxicating whim.
Feelings this strong,
Can only be expressed like this,
I drift through each day,
Just yearning for another sweet kiss.
You are the fairest of them all,
A beauty no one will ever surpass,
If you would only let me love you,
I promise it would last.
Many people have passed through my life,
This past year since I left her,
Yet you are the only one,
To truly make my heart pure.
Words can't be spoken,
That’s why I choose to write,
I just can't stand it anymore,
I can't be with out you one more nite.
Please try to understand,
I hope these words don’t cause a scare,
Its only my medium to express,
My true feelings for you Claire.
The distance maybe far,
But these feelings are far superior,
Since I met you,
Every woman seems inferior.
These words I have written,
I hope you don’t dismiss,
They started flowing from my mind,
So I couldn’t resist.
My only desire could be satisfied,
If I knew that you thought of me,
However, my pen comes to a stop,
I guess, I'll just let these feelings be.
I am happy for you!