My mind my be gone, but...

[Young Alien Type]

A tournament,
Testament to interior monologue
Leaning over to my counterpart, I ask
"Excuse me,
Are we getting anywhere?
Surely this must be as
Tiring to you as it is to me"
"I couldn't say", I reply,
"My sentience is under your shoe"
Sure, the joke's a bit off, but
The timing is right.
I'm smiling, slowly...
Laughing with me,
Laughing at me.
Silence.
Another turn of tides
Now the air about us is like our converstaion:
Empty, and smelling a little of alcohol.

 

[up all night]

hehehe The best things about inner monoglogues is that you can have a complete conversation and no-one ever need know....unless you post it in Words I guess...
I think your mind would be an interesting place to go for a swim in.

 

[ctrl]

hey, I really enjoyed this little monologue of yours.. very amusing

 

[cherub]

I loved it, i think internal dialoque is great, it seems to be the most humorous if anyone else was listening ~

 

[MDMA desciple]

this poem has a secret and I'M NOT TELLING -- MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
disciple