My Bitter sweet candy

[Taliana]

So you have denied me
and once again I am alone
My windows are frosting over
from my red blood tears

My body is entwined amongst the red icicles
and its here my heart feels no warmth
as once again I am alone.

It was only a small offer;
just for you to be present.
I should know this feeling
but yet again it cuts me open,
I am a breaking glass, I am broken.

I can't speak your name
or hear your song
because im reaching those depths
again of sweet sweet sorrow.

My bitter sweet candy

I've grasped onto the tail of your foe,
reality for months now.

But we all know those with a sweet tooth,
will surrender themselves willingly,
and ravish its sweet kiss by the
nightfall of the birth of sorrows child.

My true friend

And again, here i dwell,
stumped at lifes obstacle
Wishing and waiting
Anxious and debating

Its slipping away,
You've slipped away.

Im slipping

 

[neverwas]

I've grasped onto the tail of your foe,
reality for months now.

your writting improoves every time you write. and u manage to go into such depths with your discription it draws me in.

love you hun (and i will always catch you when you fall)

 

[cherub]

I really liked this one, i would put it as one of your best !

outstanding!

 

[RareForm]

^I agree...wow...outstanding piece...

thanks for sharing..

 

[doofqueen]

Yeah i agree also, thats probaly the best piece you have written, that was beautiful and i really felt what you were feeling

 

[Taliana]

Ta again This is actually one of my favourite pieces ive ever written aswell. Im really pleased with how it turned out...

Thanks for being great readers!

(and u know whats funny, the next day, i got a response from the person i was writing about and it was good... so yeah...)