my 2nd peom, written in a ball of depression

[tathra]

darkness everywhere
devouring me whole
a glimmer of light
pierces the black
its brightness of white
calls me from the void
but betray me doe s this star
this gleaming hope
fails to save me
into darkness deeper i fall
love can save noone
the black in my heart
continues to swell
growing and crushing
the all consuming darkness of an impure heart
unsure of itself and of others
blacker than jet
harder than diamond
the pain to its owner is irreversable
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i know it sucks, it was my 2nd poem ever. sue me.
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>laugh, and the world laughs with you. cry, and you cry alone.
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aim: tathra san

 

[Partycries]

that doesn't suck. thats pretty good bro. i feel that it has a meaning deeper than what it says.
if u think u aren't good, practice, i promise the more u practice the more pleased u will be with your results.
party

 

[sunEdltye]

Great poem

BRAVO!!
Tathra- your a great GUY who doesnt need any depression, only a nice rack

Take care bro and keep writing your magic

 

[FutureAeons]

tathra, that is beautifully written. I hope to see you post more in Words.

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"How the fuck do you feellllll?"
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[unicorn83]

that was pretty damn good! it just took me back to how i felt when i was waay in that black hole. but i promise you u will get out of it slowly but eventually.
don't lose hope, and never let that light fade away.
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'id rather live in an illusion than face harsh reality' me
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