More than hello

[Dagny]

And I thought I heard your voice last night, telling me of all the places we would go.
And I could have sworn that I saw your face in passing last week, smiling like you had a secret to tell.
And once last month I believed that you had called my house, for the message was vague and reeked of your humor.
And this morning I knew that you had left my world, for I looked around and I felt the difference in the air.
And I was relieved this afternoon when I heard that you were happy, and that you thought of me once in a while.
But what will you do when you look for me and I'm not there?
Who will you tell your secrets to when no one is there to take down the message?
Write to me and tell me of your travels.
Call me and speak to me of the thousand nights since I saw you last.
See me and describe for me all of the days that you were gone - of love, of hate, of sunrises and the time the guy at the cleaners lost your favorite shirt.
I never wanted you for more than your friendship... don't ask me for more than hello.
There can be no promises made beyond that word, for it has been years now.
And I still remember the lines of your face.

 

[Noodle]

hi

 

[Dagny]

High Noodle.

 

[LilkelPixy]

this poem really tugged at my heart. nice work, dagne

~Pixy

 

[E-girl]

dagny
of all the "poets" in here... you continue to be one my favorites. you have a way of taking things i have buried in my mind and putting them into beautifully built phrases. your poems always make my breath catch in my throat at the end, and whether its tears to follow or a smile, your poems always get some kind of reaction from my heart.
i think i have someone like this in my life, in fact i think we all do. its just that no one could have said this any better.
this is my favorite line:

See me and describe for me all of the days that you were gone - of love, of hate, of sunrises and the time the guy at the cleaners lost your favorite shirt.

i think it goes to say that calling someone up just to bullshit sometimes means a lot more than you think. i, for one, am terrible at keeping in touch with people. i hardly ever use the phone. but if one of my old friends called me, even if they really had nothing to say, it would probably mean the world to me.
nice work sweetie. keep writing.
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IM: tiggersgurl2067
*Choice, not chance, determines destiny*
"November is all I know."

 

[poezante]

Wonderful piece.

 

[SpeedLimit55]

Damn.
I luv you girl

 

[Spencer]

Hello...
-Spencer

 

[Lexi]

i know that feeling oh so well

 

[Sweetpea]

You see clear

 

[lilygirl]

this really touched me.
thank you.

 

[PixieGirl]

WOW! Amy beautiful work. You inspire me with your words. Sometimes I feel as though you write what I am thinking. I can't wait to meet you one day.

 

[Crow]

 

[~*Meg*~]

Dagny~
That was beautiful....such an uncanny way of of describing exactly how I sometimes feel.

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Weep not sad soul, nor forget, that sunrise never failed us yet.

 

[ice-9]

i am continuously impressed with you
[This message has been edited by ice-9 (edited 28 August 2001).]

 

[alykitty]

^
^Aren't we are all, ice????
Dags, awesome work girl!!!
Colon D:

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The above girlie is protected by the Triad!!!
Like a shooting star across the midnight sky, no matter where you are, you're gonna see me fly...