More or Less

[psycosynthesis]

Weightlessness
forgetfulness
tenderness misplaced
it’s featherless with lead
and each of us
are as light
as the other sinks
and the feather rises
with your breath
lessness and
turns in the airlessness
it’s like gravity
lessness time slows the less
there is to take a

breath


it’s more essential than you think.

 

[Mehm]

i like the continuity and zen nature of this

 

[swilow]

Excellent. There is actually a 'breathless' feeling when reading it, the lines are short and sharp.

OM

 

[lostNfound]

You kept this simple and it works well.