Monkey on my back...

No you didn't
What happened?!?!? This started off so POWERFULLY MOVING! It had just the right amount of humor, wit, sarcasm and a pinch of slick lingo! Come on, the inner monologues were RIGHT on! Perfect! Every "fucker" and "asshole", was right on time. I had goose bumps and the geebeis from every accurate depiction of intense withdrawal. It was HUMAN- real. And then by like the 17 paragraph it died off and became so "tutorial". From Jerry to Oprah- frown. The human aspect of it seemd lost. I felt like I was in class listening to my college professor drone on and on about facts and dates. You became Wilson from "Tool Time", It doesn't add up. Trust this was good stuff, I committed quality time to its consumption, but when it's all said and done it just doesn't fell like it follows through. What...did you just become disenchanted? Did you loose your drive? Was your ambrosia from the Gods just so damn good that you couldn't continue to give what was so pleasing? It was the metho pop man... the metho pop...
Wow!....I wonder what happened with this dude. I hope "ex- bluelighter" doesn't mean dead
 
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