monday

[katmeow]

Anyone would think I'm starting a series about poems for each day of the week

Something I wrote while admiring the view out the window at work today...

monday

so welcome to monday
good morning to mundanity
usher in another
day of tedium, bore
and highrise headaches
lies & fake smiles
i'm great, how are you
a cardboard cut out
could take my place

a brief salvation lies
through 19th floor windows
beyond the concrete
and steel jungle
away from the city smog
the horizon beckons
a lone aeroplane flies
through gold flecked clouds
to a destination unknown

for a moment i'm away
lost in daydreams
of where i'd rather be
then an idea manifests
if the human mind can get
a great hunk of metal
to leave the ground
surely i can fly right out
of this mental rut

 

[E-girl]

that's how my mondays feel too.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Allright! I really really liked this!

then an idea manifests
if the human mind can get
a great hunk of metal
to leave the ground
surely i can fly right out
of this mental rut

^^ You are quite brilliant!!!

 

[Cosmic Mist]

You know i can relate to this. Lordy lordy yes... i can definately relate to this, especially after the day i've had...

But then, today is tuesday, so perhaps i have it all wrong...

 

[up all night]

Yeah that last paragraph on particular was great.

And you know what, I think it's actually a really cute idea to write a poem for every day of the week. There's something unique about every day...

 

[katmeow]

/\/\/\

Terrible Tuesday will be next

 

[neverwas]

:D

 

[Raz]

Yeah, that last paragraph was great...nice and inspiring

 

[cherub]

really well done girl you, this I loved reading.

 

[RareForm]

I enjoyed this.