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neverwas

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The yellow brick road!
Its finally crept in.
Like night peeking through the door.
Tears have finally surfaced
Sleeping in your jumper I huddle into bed.
A mere comfort to the now chaos in my mind.

Dancing takes my mind away
If only for a brief moment.
There’s just such an emptiness thats tryin its hardest to grow.
Music brings back memories.
Drunken nights
Happy days.

I wish you were here right now
To wipe my tears away.

Things for some reason seem uncertain
Clouded by an unknown emotion
Shading my night bringing me fear.
I don’t like not knowing
I don’t like losing control.
I miss my cuddles
I miss the noises we’d make.
The thumps we’d get in trouble for.

I wish you were here right now
Theres so much I want to say
Theres so much I want to do.

I wish you were here right now
To wipe my tears away.
I wish I didn’t miss you.

:(
 
Wow -- very nice. It has a very intimate feel which is obviously something you were trying to portray and I think you did it pretty successfully.
Probably the best thing about it though is that the reader can interpret this piece in various ways. For instance -- loss of a loved one, loss of a friend, or relationship loss/trouble (even all of these to some degree perhaps).
Good work ;)
 
thanx Dandy. i like it when people can pick up a number of things through what i write. what i normally write is always based on some form of emotion in my life right now. its an outlet for me.

im just missing some one pretty close right now :(
 
a carry on to the original post up the top.

i tried to call you but couldnt get through.
you said you may not have any signal
so i silently said a prayer for you.
for protection and love
to keep you safe and warm.
the nights where you feel lonely
thoughts lingering
leading memories to home.
i wish you were here curled up next to me.
whispering good nights in each others ear.

your absense is noted
as i look at your bed and sigh.
its cold here today its only around 19.
im still wearing your jumper
i will probably wear it when i sleep.
the weekend is long
as i wonder how you are.
i ate pasta till i died today
i should be out dancing at a bar.

ive had this migraine for two whole days now.
nothing seems to aid in release.
i wish you were here for me to snuggle.
someone who can make my mind feel at ease.

not much more can be said as my friendship for you only seems to increase.
absense makes the heart grow fonder.
but distance makes me realise just how much i really miss.
your absense is noted
as i look at your bed and sigh.
i pray again and say to you 'good night, i hope you sleep well'
the light goes off
as night ever so slowly ticks on by.

i miss you. :(





thanx taliana and up_all_night...*hugs* you two are great friends.im just a bit out of sorts right now. its all good though. its funny how you dont realise how much of someone you will miss till theyre not around...you two girls are the best. mwah
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