sunEdltye
Ex-Bluelighter
It wasnt the way she laid their dead that made me remember her, but her silky cream skin. The kind that is almost smooth like an ice cream cone. Her eyes were a raddist red and her hair was an amber gold. Nothing was prettier, than her.
She drove the freeway in the land of Elvis and scotch. Her car was a 69 Mustang that had a pair of dice in the mirror. She was only 18 herself, yet way ahead of the game then anyone else her age. She felt like she knew something no one else knew. The key to life.
I can imagine how she went to sleep. First making sure her window was open then listenning to music while writing a poem. She only could be asleep when the night quieted down and only the faint crickets could be heard. Then she could sleep, alone.
She'd drive long distances to places like Vegas or LA. While driving she was against a red planet with the rocks as kings. The sky shaped a psychodelic mirage of colors the screamed of haze and hash. Her Mustang glided like a butterfly chasing a smoke stack.
She was the girl I always loved and finally found into my arms.
Evan
[ 14 March 2002: Message edited by: sunEdltye ]
She drove the freeway in the land of Elvis and scotch. Her car was a 69 Mustang that had a pair of dice in the mirror. She was only 18 herself, yet way ahead of the game then anyone else her age. She felt like she knew something no one else knew. The key to life.
I can imagine how she went to sleep. First making sure her window was open then listenning to music while writing a poem. She only could be asleep when the night quieted down and only the faint crickets could be heard. Then she could sleep, alone.
She'd drive long distances to places like Vegas or LA. While driving she was against a red planet with the rocks as kings. The sky shaped a psychodelic mirage of colors the screamed of haze and hash. Her Mustang glided like a butterfly chasing a smoke stack.
She was the girl I always loved and finally found into my arms.
Evan
[ 14 March 2002: Message edited by: sunEdltye ]
Though I think you should remove the last line, because that piece feels complete and the end is a payoff if you don't let the secret go