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"MIRROR BOY" a work in process...please read and give - and + comments

youthoughtyouknew

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I walk past the mirror notocing him occasionally,
hes no older than 8 and no wiser than 80,
his looks though that of a boy,
young and tainted, no longer full of dreams,

At times his emotions come out to play,
i see him crying and screaming his shame,
but no words are spoken just an unneeded look,
he seems fimiliar,

At times i wish an exscape to his world,
one that may be of more peace,
i see now hes hopefull and needs some clensing,

Mirror boy tell me what i need,
tell me what it takes to make the world see,
that everything they are is not everything they'll be,
times chane and so do we,

i wake up and goto pee,
he's there when i walk past and i now have to see,
mirror boy why are you so sad,
miooro boy why is your shield so clad,

he said nothing but srare,unsure if to share,
 
Good work. :)

I particularly enjoyed the first stanza of this, and the way it flows creates a nice picture in my mind.
 
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